I need the opinion of book readers and writers!!!?

This is very original! I like the idea of the Paranormal and Romance. (I like your name by the way "I LOVE JESUS" (: I do too!) I think it shoudl start with a boy meets girl, Girl turns out to be some paranormal creature that can shift to a human form or something, tries to warn boy what will happen, he doesnt believe her, it starts happening, he finds her-now believeing, she tries to protect him, the enemy gets him, she saves him... That type of deal. (: I hope this might help. if you have any other questions please email me personally at calibre_17@live.com (: